I'm trying to make a scene work. If this was a fresh scene, then it could have been done in five minutes. But if I change it, then it would involve changing six or seven other scenes, probably. So, I'm kinda lost in the whole thing. Need to take myself out of it.
If I do it right, it might come out something like this:
I was thinking and smoking and farting my ass off when suddenly, a baker showed up and challenged me to a baking duel.
I accepted and we soon got to baking. He used a brick oven and came up with: ROTI SUNGAI LEMBING!
The legendary, lost bread that died with its baker.
Kuroyonagi took the bread and ate it. At first, nothing happened. And then, he started digging a mine shaft.
Kuroyonagi: Not just ANY mine shaft! This is the DEEPEST TIN MINE SHAFT IN THE WORLD! The brick oven really did bring the taste out!
It was a great reaction, but I was not scared.
I used STUFF I FOUND IN THE FRIDGE and made...GARBAGE BREAD!
Kuroyonagi ate it and immediately had diarrhea and gas and announced me as the wiener.
Now, to finish my script.